Making Corrections To The Title Sequences According To The Comments Made By The Class

The elements that worked;

• The typography come in nicely 
• The cuts are good between shots
• The music works well with the overall flow of the sequence
• The pace of the sequence and how the music and pacing of edits matches the overall theme of the sequence
• The way the titles appeared behind some things within the room
• The music connotes comedy which shows the genre of the title sequence

Things that need developing;

• The end titles (film name and production company) can come at the beginning
• Foley sound from within the sequence itself
• Titles at the end didn't work well
• Shot was too long at the end of the film 
• Bigger titles (change the size of the titles so they are easier to see)
• Final typography and transition for the title of the film looked like a PowerPoint presentation

Things that didn't work at all;

• The class did not find anything about our title sequence that did not work at all

As you can see below this is our teachers review on our title sequence, we made sure to do all corrections and make all improvements according to his feedback as it was the most valuable feed back that we received.

We will now use all of this information and feedback that we have been given from the class and go back to our title sequence and make the necessary corrections so that it looks more professional and like a much better title sequence.